The Weekly Features 6-8-2014

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Deviation Actions

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The Pianistthis poster outside my window
is torn and see through
too frail to last
oh, what were you expecting
it's just a gutter press collage
the sun I painted on the ceiling
is  maybe the only thing
I'll miss
I'm praying to never come back
from this journey as I hit the keys
but when the music fades away
the walls I built will start to crush
and as the pain of truth invades
I realise that happiness can never last
and yet another tune I play
and still the future's a replayed past
the fight's uneven my life's at stake
I'm struggling to make a new world out of dust
I lean against the body
that gives me bread
and hope and strength
I rely on nobody
I write my story without a pen
No one will ever read it
but still I want it
to be heard
I hope it won't get lost through
the deafening noise of the modern World
but when the music fades away
the walls I built will start to crush
and as the pain of truth invades
I realise that happiness can never last
and yet another tune I play
and still the future'

by FlameAlive
Suggester said
The emotions here are really a lot more vivid than it seems, and the imagery used impacts the emotions almost perfectly.

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by Tardar-Sauce
Suggester said
Absurdly amusing, but you'd need to have played MineCraft to understand it.

The Company You KeepShe has a pretty face
Carries herself with quiet pride
But not all monsters
Show on the outside
He has such charisma
Silver tongue with gold
But not all liars
Let themselves be known
Some scepticism to keep you healthy
Always be wary of the company you keep
They seem to know it all
And have proof for you to judge
But the best charades are pulled
From those you would never suspect
Some throw their way in your face
Saying you should believe that or this
But truth is a funny thing
Doubt those who say they’ve found it
Some disagreement to keep you healthy
Always be wary of the company you keep
It’s a tricky thing
And heavenly masks are so easy to wear
Who is what and what is real?
Take heed and talk with care
Some pessimism to keep you healthy
Always be wary of the company you keep

by DivineEqualizer
Suggester said
I found this intriguing, and I found that I enjoyed that the rhyming all but ended after the first verse, the flow of the piece made up for it.

A Lullaby...Sleep, well, my little dear
For today has now passed;
I will always be here,
To see that your dreams
Come to last.
Fret not 'bout tomorrow
Just rest & dream sweet little dreams;
I vow to keep away
All the sorrow,
So sleep well
My angel, sweet sleep.
All of your wishes will come true
If continue moving on;
When you feel you can't make it through,
Just remember the words
To this little song.
I will be here for you
Always here for you.

by redhawk1986
Suggester said
This was just plain sweet.

Scarlet RoseAs her breath sighs
under starry skies one chilly morning
another little baby dragon’s born
as she let go
and her baby cries
for if there’s one thing that make hearts bleed
is that another great dragon’s soul is freed
from the pain, oh.
She will never understand
how in this great, vast land,
she’ll surely come to ask the question one day,
She will look at you and me,
and see a family.
She will simply turn her head
and spread her wings and fly away..
As the wind turns
And a growing young dragon named Scarlet Rose
flies down from the North to the Western Close
as the storm grows
and her longing yearns
on the path along her journey flight
she heard a cry over forest sight
from the trees oh,
She heard a cry of desperation
and she dove down to her prey,
the child can’t run, the child is scarred,
there’s not one, but a broken car
just a lonely prize
As the suns rise on a growing young man,
riding dragon back over golden lands
on her wings oh
Over bright bl

by Amuris
Suggester said
This was really interesting to read. It's got fantasy, family, and spirituality all wrapped up and presented as one piece, and I feel it's better for it.

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All the best for your group ahead. :) :salute: